Chapter XIX: Book THREE: The Passing of Youth (6)
-- p. 42: their voices seemed to him to come from very far away, The unheaval had stunned him, had destroyed his volition and paralysed his dreams.--Changed the comma after "away" to a period and "unheaval" to "upheaval" in keeping with the Doran edition.
-- p. 48: "That'll do. That'll do," said Moscowitch.--Changed "Moscowitch" to "Moscowitsch" for consistency.
-- p. 84: "No," said the Professor." I don't know what that is. It certainly isn't drawing."--Changed the closing quotation mark after "Professor" to an opening quotation mark before "I".
-- p. 84: and he says: "I mean to say, that isn't drawing.--Changed the opening double quotation mark to an opening single quotation mark.
-- p. 116: You may renember her--glorious chestnut hair, big blue eyes, but as shy as a little mouse.--Changed "renember" to "remember".
-- p. 139: And then when I get home and it is just a house and I am just a girl living it it--Changed the first "it" after "living" to "in".
-- p. 158: hair brushed back from a round, well shaped brow.--Inserted a hyphen between "well" and "shaped".
-- p. 184: as they went through their Public Schools and were more and compressed into type--Inserted the word "more" between "and" and "compressed" in keeping with the Doran edition.
-- p. 189: "But he cares for poetry and the Bible and he loves pictures. . ."--Added an additional period at the end of the sentence in keeping with the Doran edition.
-- p. 216: finding some dam fool to take you to a music-hall--For consistency and in keeping with the Doran edition, changed "dam" to "damn".
-- p. 217: When you're starving you don't want chocolates. . .--Added an additional period at the end of the sentence in keeping with the Doran edition.
-- p. 234: He says its something deeper--Changed "its" to "it's".
-- p. 245: No, no, no! . . . .--Deleted the fourth period in keeping with the Doran edition.
-- p. 266: "What has happened?" Does he knock her about?"--Deleted the closing quotation mark after "happened?"
-- p. 271: "That is all very well while you are young " said Logan--Inserted a comma between "young" and the closing quotation mark.
-- p. 290: the furniture was old and exquisite. . .--Added an additional period at the end of the sentence in keeping with the Doran edition.
-- p. 297: and through that love his passion for art--Added a period at the end of the sentence.
-- p. 298: Cluny."--Inserted an opening double quotation mark at the beginning of the sentence.
-- p. 316: "O God! O God! O God!'--Changed the closing single quotation mark to a closing double quotation mark.
-- p. 341: You said you were'nt going to dance.--Changed "were'nt" to "weren't".
-- p. 344: "Yes You are very honest--Added a period after "Yes".
-- p. 351: "You can't stop it," said Logan--Added a period at the end of the sentence.
-- p. 358: "If it was my house, I would kick them out.'--Changed the closing single quotation mark to a closing double quotation mark.
-- p. 380: "What do you want, then?--Added a closing double quotation mark at the end of the sentence.
-- p. 397: "Then it's a sketch and not a picture.'--Changed the closing single quotation mark to a closing double quotation mark.
-- p. 414: clouds heaped up by the driving wind--beautiful, beautiful. . .--Added a fourth period at the end of the sentence.
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