Chapter VI: Act I

Note [1]: Changed to 2 in violet pencil.
[2]: Lines from 2 to 2 scored out.
[3]: These lines scored out, and "we will have" added.
[4]: This word underlined.
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[6]: These lines scored out, "what news to-night?" inserted.
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[8]: Altered to "He."
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[10]: Altered to "signal for."
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[13]: Altered to "Be calm, Michael!"
[14]: These words underlined.
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[19]: Lines scored out, "from Berlin" inserted.
[20]: Word scored through.
[21]: Altered to "strong."
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[24]: Altered to "martial law scheme."
[25]: Altered to "To raise the barricades."
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[27]: The word "pause" as a stage direction inserted.
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[33]: Words "Who is there?" inserted.
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[37]: Altered to "He has sold us."
[38]: Word underlined.