Chapter VIII: Conclusion: Proof of the Creator’s power and wisdom found in the
ocean.
_The Same Plan Condensed._
SUBJECT.—THE OCEAN.
1. VASTNESS AND POWER.
2. PARTS, USE, AND MYSTERY.
3. EVIDENCE.
DEAN SWIFT’S SERMON.
This eccentric clergyman once preached a sermon shorter than its own text, yet having all the three parts of which we have spoken. The text was Prov. xix, 20: “He that pitieth the poor lendeth to the Lord; and that which he hath given will He pay him again.”
The sermon was:
“Brethren, you hear the condition; if you like the security, down
with the dust.”
The collection is said to have been munificent.
In this short sermon the text with the word “Brethren” constitutes the introduction; the phrase, “you hear the condition,” is a good transition to the discussion contained in the next member, “if you like the security,” which assumes the truth of the text, makes its general declarations present and personal, and prepares the way for the forcible and practical, if not very elegant, conclusion, “down with the dust.”
Among the many speeches found in Shakespeare, the existence of these three essential parts may easily be noted. The funeral speeches over the dead body of Julius Cæsar afford an excellent example. The merit of the orations of Brutus and Antony are very unequal, but both are instructive. We will analyze them in turn.
Brutus speaks first. He shows his want of appreciation of the true nature of persuasive eloquence by declaring that this will be an advantage. His introduction is also too long and elaborate for the work he has in hand. The central thought with which he opens is in substance, “I am worthy of your closest attention.” This cannot be considered a fortunate beginning, and it would have been fatal for any one less highly esteemed by the people than “the well-beloved Brutus.” He says:
BRUTUS’ SPEECH.
“Romans, countrymen, and lovers! hear me for my cause, and be silent
that you may hear; believe me for mine honor, and have respect to
mine honor that you may believe; censure me in your wisdom and awake
your senses that you may the better judge.”
This introduction is a master-piece of Shakespeare’s art, because it pictures so well the character of Brutus in his dignity and blind self-confidence; but for Brutus it is unfortunate, because it puts him on the defensive and makes the people his judges. He must now plead well, or they will condemn him.
In the discussion the thought simply is, “I was Cæsar’s friend, and therefore you may well believe that I would not have killed him if he had not deserved death because of his ambition.” This is the whole argument, and it is weak because it does not prove the ambition of Cæsar, or show that ambition on Cæsar’s part was a crime which Brutus had a right to punish with death. The antithetic sentences lack both logic and passion. As they touch neither head nor heart, they can have but slight and momentary effect. Notice the discussion as an example of fine words which do not serve their purpose.
“If there be any in this assembly, any dear friend of Cæsar’s, to
him I say that Brutus’ love to Cæsar was no less than his. If, then,
that friend demand why Brutus rose against Cæsar, this is my answer:
Not that I loved Cæsar less, but that I loved Rome more. Had you
rather Cæsar were living, and die all slaves, than that Cæsar were
dead, to live all freemen? As Cæsar loved me, I weep for him; as he
was fortunate, I rejoice at it; as he was valiant, I honor him; but
as he was ambitious, I slew him. There are tears for his love, joy
for his fortune, honor for his valor, and death for his ambition.
Who is here so base that would be a bondman? If any, speak; for him
have I offended. Who is here so rude, that would not be a Roman? If
any, speak; for him have I offended. Who is here so vile that will
not love his country? If any, speak; for him have I offended. I
pause for a reply.”
As several citizens cry out, “None, Brutus, none,” he passes to the conclusion, which is as weak as the discussion.
“Then none have I offended. I have done no more to Cæsar, than you
shall do to Brutus. As I slew my best lover for the good of Rome, I
have the same dagger for myself, when it shall please my country to
need my death.”
He has gained nothing by the whole speech, save the knowledge that none of the citizens present care at that time to impeach him for his crime; but their minds were open to other influences. Shakespeare thus shows how an able man might use all his powers in the perfection of oratorical and rhetorical forms, without producing a great or effective speech. Antony now comes forward. Behold the contrast!
ANTONY’S SPEECH.
The introduction is like and unlike that of Brutus. The same three titles are used; the same call for attention. But there is no repetition, no egotism, no elaboration. The introduction is short, calling attention to his ostensible purpose, and prepares for a beautiful transition to the discussion.
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