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The man was gray-haired and big and fat and unromantic, but he
loved the cloak model desperately. He told her so every time he
saw her, but she laughed at him. She knew him as Lem Willhide
"of Kentucky," and she tried to avoid him. He followed her one
day to her room in the home of Mrs. Louise Wendt, 1319 Eddy
Street, and invited himself to call. He wanted to marry her, to
take her home to the "blue grass" country with him, but she
could not be annoyed.
"I ought to be calling you 'daddy,'" she said. "Why, you're
more than twice as old as I. You've admitted you are 52. Go get
a nurse and let me alone."
He seemed to like her spirit. She could not break his
determination, he told her. He might be old, but this was his
first love affair. Again and again she put him off. Always he
followed her, spied on her, called her by phone. She could not
escape him, but he couldn't persuade her to wed him.
Yesterday morning as usual he sent his love message over the
telephone wires--and the girl hung up the receiver and she
sneered in an explanation to the landlady. Later she was
dressing to go out, when the back door of the rooming-house
opened and the man from Kentucky bulged in the doorway.
"You've got your nerve coming into a lady's house without
asking," said the girl.
"I've come to get you," said the man.
"Then you better go back again," and the girl turned away.
The man from Kentucky drew a revolver and shot her in the neck.
She looked up at him from the floor, and he fired four more
bullets into her body.
"If we can't be wed in life, we'll marry in death," the landlady
heard him say, and he shot himself in the head.
Miss Helm died as the police were carrying her into the Chicago
Union Hospital, and the man from Kentucky died later in the
Alexian Brothers' Hospital. Before he went he told Detective
William Rohan that he was a tobacco salesman and a professional
card player.
"I drew for a queen to fill a bobtail flush," he said, with a
queer smile, "but I didn't better my hand."
_CHAUFFEUR'S FEET BURNED OFF_
Herbert T. Middleton lives on Anderson Avenue, at Palisade, N.
J. While driving his automobile along the avenue he saw an
overturned car burst into flame at the roadside, about half a
mile south of Fort Lee. Two men and a boy were struggling to
lift the rear end of the car, and shouting for help. Middleton
hurried to their aid and found that the legs of the chauffeur
were pinned to the ground by the back of the rear seat and
flaming gasoline running over his limbs was burning him like a
torch.
The chauffeur, Amendo Alberti, 32 years old, raised himself to
a sitting posture and tried to direct the efforts of his
rescuers. With the aid of another autoist and several drivers of
passing wagons, they finally got Alberti free. The burning
gasoline had spread upward to his body. It was smothered by
rolling the man in lap robes from the cars.
Dr. Max Wyley of Englewood Hospital, who came with an ambulance,
found that the chauffeur's feet had been almost burned off, and
the burning fluid had seared his limbs and body as far as his
chest. At the hospital Doctor Proctor assisted Doctor Wyley in
an effort to keep him alive. They decided he had one chance in
five of living. If he survives he will be a cripple.
_BLAMES ALL ON WOMAN HE KILLED_
"The woman Thou gavest me tempted me and I did eat."--Adam,
thousands of centuries ago.
Shortly after the world began, Adam sinned--and blamed a woman.
What Adam did in fear of God, a twentieth-century Adam did
yesterday in Chicago--blamed a woman.
Here is the story:
Attaches of a saloon and cafe at 714 North Clark Street were
startled early yesterday afternoon by revolver shots just
outside the door. Rushing into an alley at the rear, they found
the bodies of a man and a woman.
The man was Washington Irving Morley, son of a wealthy
contractor of Kansas City. The woman was Mrs. May Whitney, 29
years old, cabaret singer and mother of a 3-year-old child.
As they picked the bodies up, a letter dropped from the man's
coat. It told everything that need be told about the dead man,
the dead woman, and the dead man's deed.
It was addressed "To Anybody," and read:
This is an awful deed, but this woman is and has been ten
thousand times worse than the vampire of fiction, and may
God have mercy on her soul and mine. Yes, I guess I am
crazy and have been for a year, but she has driven me to
it. I left her in K. C., but she followed me to Chicago
and then to Green Bay and all over.
But it is too late to cry about our mistakes.
I have had my chances, but I have thrown them all away.
Oh, if I had only taken the advice years ago of that
grandest of all men, my father. But I let the three W's
get me--wine, women, and w--. But, young men, remember,
do not get infatuated with a woman of doubtful character.
They never can lead to anything good.
I have had my fling, but now I am going to the great
beyond and I'm going to take the creature with me that
has caused me more bad luck, heartaches, and everything
else. I cannot live with her and I cannot live without
her.
Good-by all. W. S. Morley.
P. S.--My belongings are all in her trunk, which is at
Spangenberg's. I think her mother's address is 123 Pinckney
Street, Somerville, Mass., Mrs. D. T. Whitney.
The bodies were taken to Gavin & Son's undertaking rooms. There
a second letter was found in the man's pocket. It was addressed
to his father, P. J. Morley, in Kansas City, and read as follows:
You no doubt will be horrified, but I couldn't help it. I
have been crazy for a year, and this woman has driven me
to it. You have been the grandest father in the world to
me, and if only I had taken your advice, what a change it
would have made in my life! But it is too late. Good-by,
and may God have mercy on my soul. Yours,
Irving.
P. S.--Father, if you want to do anything, take care of
that boy in Hamburg, Iowa. He will be some boy if he
doesn't inherit too many of his parents' bad faults.
Until recently Morley was a partner in the expressing firm of Ryan &
Morley, Fifth Avenue and Randolph Street.
_SLAIN IN FIGHT ON BRIDGE_
A horrified crowd to-day saw a fight sixty feet in the air on an
arch of the new high-level bridge over the Cuyahoga River in
which Frank Wright, storekeeper for the bridge contractors, was
killed by a fellow workman with an iron bar. The killing was
witnessed by Wright's wife, who was making her way up to him
with his lunch. Police have arrested Jack Browning in connection
with the crime. The killing was preceded by a grim struggle in
which the two men wrestled back and forth on the arch and both
nearly fell into the river several times. After Wright had been
slain his assailant jumped from platform to platform until he
reached the ground and then fled.
_AGED MAN GAINS HEARTS DESIRE_
Joseph Stang has gained his heart's desire. He is dead.
For Joseph Stang death drew aside its mask of horror and
revealed itself the fair prize and ultimate reward of mankind,
impartially awaiting the winners and losers in life. And the
aged man pursued it for a year with patient resolution,
undiverted by the inconsequential parade of the world's affairs.
During the last year Mr. Stang, who was 81 years old, and a
retired real-estate man, living with an invalid wife at 4855
North Paulina Street, made three ineffectual attempts to commit
suicide. His first effort was discovered before he had succeeded
in injuring himself. On Oct. 30 he sent a bullet into his brain
in his bedroom. Persons in the household ran to him and found
him lying on the floor, the revolver beside him. He was placed
on the bed, and during the excitement of telephoning for an
ambulance and a physician, the members of the household left him
alone, believing him unconscious, if not dead. He got out of bed
and crawled to his revolver, which had been picked up and placed
on the bureau. Then he fired another shot over his heart.
He was taken to the hospital, where his wounds, although both in
vital parts, healed rapidly, and he was soon discharged. Because
of his infirmities and the illness of his wife he was later
taken to the German-American Hospital to be cared for.
Saturday morning he told his nurse that he was tired of life.
She cajoled him into a better humor, however, and he ate three
hearty meals during the day. Shortly after supper he was left
alone in his room. He went to his window, which overlooks a
cemented court twenty feet below, and dived out, striking on his
head. He was dead within a few minutes.
Physicians at the hospital declare that Mr. Stang must have
calculated his jump carefully, as a falling body would not
strike head first unless by design.
_DARK STREETS MAKE THREE ESCAPES POSSIBLE_
Policemen on posts in the Bronx have frequently complained to
their superior officers because the turning off of street lights
before daylight often gives burglars and other criminals an hour
or more of heavy darkness in which to carry on their operations
unmolested. The most emphatic of such complaints was made
yesterday morning, after three burglars had escaped from pursuit
at 4:30 A.M.
According to the policemen who attempted to capture the men, all
of the lights in the Bronx were out at the time and heavy clouds
made the streets black as midnight in a country village. The
policemen attributed the escape of the burglars entirely to the
darkness. Not only did the men escape, but they fired revolvers
at the policemen and narrowly missed one of them, who heard the
bullet as it passed his head.
Sergeant Hale and Policeman Regen of the Morrisania Station were
standing in Westchester Avenue near Union Avenue shortly before
4:30 o'clock, when they heard the crashing of a pane of glass.
They ran to Union Avenue in time to see the dim shadows of three
men running from the corner. The two policemen shouted to the
men to stop and fired their revolvers, but the fugitives,
returning the fire over their shoulders, darted down Union
Avenue, separated, and disappeared into apartment house doors.
Policemen Rooney and O'Connell, who were several blocks away,
heard the shots and ran to the scene. The alarm was sent to the
precinct station, and while the four policemen were following
the burglars into the apartment houses, the reserves were
hurrying to their assistance.
Hale and Regen surprised one of the men on a roof and opened
fire on him, but, as far as they could tell in the inky
darkness, he was not hit. As he fled to the roof of an adjoining
house he fired at the policemen, and Hale could tell from its
sound that the bullet passed within a few inches of his head.
The man disappeared into the darkness, and the policemen were
unable to find him again.
Other policemen followed the other two burglars, the reserves
surrounded the block, and many of those living in the
neighborhood who were aroused from sleep by the revolver shots,
joined in the hunt; but the trail of none of the fugitives was
picked up. It was so dark, the searchers said, that they were
not able to see more than a few feet ahead of them at any time.
All agreed that the burglars probably hid almost under the noses
of those who were looking for them, for every roof, alley and
possible hiding place in the block was searched as carefully as
was practicable under the conditions.
The men had thrown a brick through the window in the jewelry
store of M. Baldwin, at Westchester and Union Avenues. They
snatched about $100 worth of novelty objects from the window,
but dropped all of them in their flight. The property was later
picked up from the street.
Many complaints have come to the _New York Crescent_ from all
over the city because there is often an hour or more of darkness
between the time of turning out street lights and daylight. The
lighting companies, it is said, are within the law of their
contracts with the city.
_CHAPTER XI_
Indicate the places at which paragraphs should be made in the following stories:
_CHARACTER INDICATED BY THE LIPS_
To all daughters of Eve who have leap-year intentions, the
vocational guide and well-known bachelor, William J. Kibby,
to-day offers advice concerning the habits, characteristics, and
dispositions of various sorts of men, which is intended to help
the girls win their hearts' desires without suffering rebuff in
the process. A good deal of what Kibby says is based upon
phrenology. A man who has thin, straight lips is branded a
cold-blooded, stony-hearted creature upon whom the dearest
girl's appeal would have no effect. This sort of man will do his
own proposing, run his own wedding, and rule his household; and
he'll do it more with his head than with his heart. But if the
man of your choice has full, well-formed lips, Kibby says you
may depend upon his capacity for, and inclination to, love. He
also is susceptible to the right sort of feminine approach.
Kibby says the way to tell whether the one you love, loves you,
is by the coloring of the under lip when he is with you. Every
human emotion gives some physical demonstration when it is
aroused. The evidence that love has been aroused is given by the
deep crimsoning of the under lip. If his under lip is
perpetually pale when he is with you, he doesn't love you. If it
is crimson and you want him, grab quick; he won't run. A man
with a broad, square, massive forehead is a good business man;
he can plan ahead, has good business judgment. If the crown of
his head is high and round he is absolutely conscientious, too;
and if the back of his head is well rounded out he will love his
home, his wife, and his children and show them consideration
above everything else in the world. The man whose head is flat
on top, flat and almost even with his ears in the back and
narrow and foreshortened on the front; whose lips are thin,
whose eyes are cold, will not make a good husband in any sense
of the word, says Kibby. The longer a man's jaw-bone, the
greater his capacity for affection, according to Kibby. All
these things are as applicable to women as to men, is the
expert's opinion.
_FASHION MODEL MARRIES ALL IN BLACK_
A black wedding, one of the most remarkable ceremonies ever
performed in this country and one which made even blase New York
sit up and stare, was celebrated at the Church of St. Vincent de
Paul here to-day. It was completely black, and the first wedding
of its kind ever planned made the little fashion model, Eleanor
Klinger, the bride of Ora Cne, a designer. From the limousine in
which they threaded their way among the skyscrapers to the
little church in Twenty-third Street to the handles on the
silver service at their wedding breakfast, everything down to
the most minute detail was coal black. Even the serving men were
black; and everyone with any part in the ceremony wore black,
including black gloves. As the big black car whirled up to the
curb at 9 o'clock, the driver, who had a black mustache, twisted
the black handle on the door and out popped the little bride and
groom. They were dressed in black from head to foot. Cne, a
handsome, stocky young fellow, a little below medium height,
wore a single-breasted black broadcloth suit, cut business style
and fitting close. His collar was black and his string tie and
black silk shirt blended into his black vest. The little bride,
tripping across the sidewalk with her soon-to-be, wore black
silk slippers, a black silk dress sparingly overlaid with black
chiffon. Her wedding veil was a broad strip of black silk edged
and overlaid with black tulle, ending in large bows. This
wedding veil and train are detachable, "so," as the bridegroom
explained, "it can be used either for morning or evening." The
bride's corsage bouquet was of black pansies. After the ceremony
Mr. and Mrs. Cne sped to their black wedding breakfast at the
Cne apartment in Forty-third Street. There Cne's black valet
served black coffee, black bread, black butter (dyed), black
bass, black raisins, and blackberries. The breakfast room was in
black and white, with ebony furniture and black rugs. The silver
service, from coffee set to teaspoons, was fitted with dull
finished ebony handles. The porcelain service was black with an
edging of white. Cne and his bride will begin a tour of the
larger cities of the country with their visit to Philadelphia
Friday, where Cne will address the Teachers' Institute of
Domestic Science. Later they will go to Fort Wayne, Ind., Cne's
home town, and to Omaha, Minneapolis, Nashville, Pittsburgh,
Kansas City and later to the West Coast.[53]
[53] _Kansas City Star_, January 21, 1917.
_CHAPTER XII_
_A._ The following sentences contain pronouns incorrectly used. Indicate and correct the faults in each sentence. (Paragraphs =147-149=.)
1. While Bill Knight was riding a bucking horse at his store
Saturday he got beyond control and ran against the house and
caused concussion of the brain and they had to kill it.
2. This lunchroom cookery goes on during the second and third
hours of the morning, at the end of which each member of the
class is expected to have their respective duties done and ready
to put in the steam table for lunch.
3. The management of the Majestic Theater are preparing to put
up a number of lights down to the theater. This will be a
permanent fixture and will be very beautiful. It is to be known
as the Great White Way.
4. One difference between a man and a mule is that when a mule
turns his back on a man, he is in the most danger.
5. They passed through Wisconsin, Minnesota, and the northern
parts of North Dakota and South Dakota, and after reaching
Montana they visited many different parts of it. One evening
they took their suppers and ate on the Rocky Mountains which
will never be forgotten by the parties.
6. Each of the visitors will be requested to tell of his or her
most humorous experience as a teacher; also the most important
problem which they have met with since they became teachers.
7. It would not be right, after their work in trying to bring
all nations into universal peace, for the United States, in the
first case of this kind, to turn against its own policies and
not listen to the appeal of the South American countries to
arbitrate the dispute for them.
8. Last night I sat in a gondola on Venice's Grand Canal,
drinking it all in, and life never seemed so full before.
9. Tom Wilkinson happened to a very serious accident this week
in trying to put grease on his mule to keep off the flies. The
mule became frightened and jumped, causing him a fractured rib
and dislocated shoulder.
10. The members of Kappa Beta sorority attended the funeral of
Mrs. Owen, at Benton yesterday, the mother of Miss Anne Owen of
Allgood College and a member of the sorority who died Sunday.
11. Driggs, our popular druggist, was covered with dirt Saturday
while putting up a stovepipe, some of which lodged in his eye,
giving him much pain.
12. Cornell's first touchdown was made after less than five
minutes of play. They took the kick-off and with Barrett and
Collins making long gains on every plunge through the line, the
ball was carried straight to a touchdown.
13. Miss Janet Hearn, who went to Marquette and is going to
Carroll also, suggested that each girl wear a white
chrysanthemum tied with blue ribbon when they go to Waukesha.
14. The bride entered the drawing-room on the arm of her father,
who wore a gown of white charmeuse satin, trimmed in Venetian
point lace, and with veil of the same.
15. Either every one is traveling in Italy these days or else
they have much less accommodation than usual.
16. The Du Pont Company is building four lines at their works
near this city and more than 1,000 men are now employed.
17. Birds with beautiful long tail feathers that had traveled
hundreds of miles from the warm countries of Africa sat on their
perches looking homesick for their native forests.
18. When pulling out for Glen Haven with the freight wagon
Thursday morning, Norm Watriss was notified by pedestrians on
the street that his nose was frozen. He gave up the trip, after
explaining that it had started to freeze three times that
morning.
19. The Main Street Methodist Church, at Salisbury, N. C., has
given their pastor, Rev. C. F. Sherrill, a hearty welcome.
20. It certainly will reduce the number of serious accidents in
the way of people being run over, which all desire to see.
21. Suspecting that Patterson had planned his getaway, Foster
ran to a point on the street where he knew he would intercept
him as he emerged from the alley. Both met about the same time.
22. Len French returned Wednesday evening and is greatly
improved since his accident. He was kicked by a horse about two
weeks ago in the face. We are glad that it did not leave a scar.
23. Besides Johnson and Wingers, the detectives found two
half-dollars which only a little while before had been removed
from the mold. When taken to Central police station the two
would have nothing to say.
24. Jack Murphy threatens to sue the Milwaukee Railroad for
damages sustained when he alleges a trunk was thrown out upon
him the first of the week from a Milwaukee train at their
station, which confined him to his bed, he avers.
_B._ Correct the verbs in the following sentences (paragraphs =150-153=):
1. An eighteen-year-old girl with four younger brothers and
sisters were arraigned in court this morning charged with
running an illicit distillery.
2. An elaborate series of special devotions always take place at
this season in Roman Catholic and Episcopal parishes.
3. All the party had expected to have got to the theater in time
by starting from the house at 7:45.
4. Every one of the 824 people who have been married in Appleton
by Dr. John Faville during the twenty-one years he has been
pastor of the Congregational church have been invited to attend
services at the church next Sunday.
5. In point of attendance it was the largest meeting the
association has ever held, sixty-four members having been
present, representing every part of the country.
6. The owners of the building wish to truly thank all the men
who were good enough to so kindly give their time and means in
the city's cause.
7. Then running up Main Street comes the woman's entrance,
woman's boudoir, lounge, men's entrance, buffet, and a shop.
8. Suits made-to-order can be detected at a glance from the
ready-made kind, and a glance at these suitings will prove that
there is no such qualities to be found in ready-made suits.
9. Obtaining a warrant two days beforehand, Officer Lord was
ready for any emergency.
10. After being put to bed, the hospital notified the West Lake
street police of the man's presence there.
11. The old Populistic following that has been Bryan's strength
in the past have been told by him over and over again that they
have no quarrel with this administration.
12. During the first six months of this year there was exported
to the United States and American possessions from Hamburg,
Luebeck, and Kiel goods to the value of $1,153,000.
13. Being tried three times already for the same offense, he
could not expect clemency now.
14. Thomas admitted that he was intending to seriously propose a
bill forbidding women wearing short or close-fitting skirts.
15. He had worked the play only four times before he had been
caught the second time.
16. The large number of carp in the Fox River this year have
caused a number of local men to become interested in
establishing a fish cannery at Appleton.
17. Neither the amount of the bonus or the salary were mentioned
by Comiskey or Ban Johnson.
18. Entering the historic church a scene of havoc and ruin is
presented--twisted beams and arches, panels and columns of
alabaster crushed into bits and lying around in heaps, the
richly carved pulpit blown to pieces with only a faint outline
of its former wonders remaining.
_C._ The following sentences illustrate faults in cooerdination and subordination. Correct the errors. (Mainly paragraphs =154-155=.)
1. John Miller had the misfortune to fall on the ice Friday and
break his wooden leg. This will lay Mr. Miller up for some time
as the limb will have to be sent away for repairs or perhaps
necessitates his buying an entirely new leg.
2. Strict attention to business, courteous treatment of those
with whom he comes in contact both in a business and social way,
and always mindful of the interests of his employer, are
qualifications fitting Mr. De Baufer as the logical successor to
Mr. Dodge.
3. Mr. Kennedy was destroying some tanglefoot fly paper that had
been used by burning same near the building, and the wind had
blown a spark into a rat hole and the draft brought the fire up
inside the studding and was hard to get at, but was put out by
the chemicals and no damage done to the building.
4. Work of constructing a Y. M. C. A. hotel costing $1,175,000
and which will provide 1,865 rooms for young men starting a
business life, was begun here to-day.
5. "Three regrettable things were done by the legislature," said
President Charles B. Rogers, Alumni association: "One was the
creation of the central board of education, dormitory
appropriations were repealed, the tuition for nonresidents was
raised."
6. While Mr. William Conklin was exercising his old pet horse
recently, he slipped on the ice, giving the horse a chance to
turn and kick him in the face, whereby a few stitches had to be
taken, but now is quite comfortable.
7. I was on the News when Donovan was on the _Journal_ and in
'87 launched my history of the People's Party, against which the
entire press was arrayed, save the _Staats-Zeitung_, Hessing's
paper, and which won out against the Law and Order party by a
majority of 10,500.
8. Some one entered the cellar at the O. L. Paris home last week
and stole about a peck of pickles. Mr. Paris says that if the
pickles are returned or paid for he will refrain from publishing
the name on an envelope found in his cellar and supposed to have
been dropped by the thief.
9. Mrs. Bordy is an attractive brunette while the groom is
connected with the Central Savings Bank and Trust Company.
10. The difference in the size of the schools is another cause
of the weakness, Oxford being the largest and seems to want
proper control.
11. She married Pancho Villa when he was a bandit and now has
two automobiles, a great many diamonds, and a fine home near the
palace.
12. Uncle Russ Brown and wife were in town and visited the
doctor and had a tooth pulled and also had one of his wife's
teeth pulled.
13. When Mrs. Albert Truskey of this city with her sister Mrs.
Louise Schwendlund of Appleton went to visit their mother who is
seriously ill at the home of her son, John Beckett, in De Pere
last Wednesday, they were greeted by another sister who, it is
alleged to have started a fracas in which one sister is said to
have slapped the other in the face.
14. Mr. Rounds underwent an operation upon his arm about a month
ago and which physicians claim to have been perfectly
successful.
15. Albert Johns upon interfering pushed the two visiting
sisters out of the house, was arrested and later released upon
furnishing a bond for $300 to keep the peace.
16. He was crossing the trestle and when seeing a freight
coming, and being desirous of crossing the track before it came,
he hurried across, and slipped, his foot falling between one of
the cross-ties. He managed to extricate his leg from the tie,
but lost his balance and the other foot slipped, precipitating
himself in his former dangerous predicament, and narrowly
escaped being crushed to death under the train, as he finally
succeeded in freeing himself and jumped across the side just as
the big freight came down the track.
17. Yesterday afternoon the ladies of St. Mary's Guild gave at
Fulrath's Opera House one of the most successful dances ever
held in Savannah. Successful not only financially but also from
society and an enjoyable point of view.
18. People with gray eyes are superficial, frivolous, given to
embrace false idols, running down blind alleys, following false
prophets, thoughtless, inconsiderate, wanting in sympathy,
neurotic, unstable, not firm and deliberate, but rash and
impetuous.
19. Mrs. Berkinshaw was handsome in pale blue hand-embroidered
crepe with a hat of black velvet trimmed with white ospreys and
carried a French bouquet of violets and pink roses.
20. The seat sale for Fiske O'Hara's play at the theatre next
Friday evening is progressing very rapidly, nothing but $1.00
and $1.50 seats being left and a great many of the $1.00 seats
have been sold.
21. Grace Marshall, confined a prisoner in her father's home
near St. Michael's, Md., for twelve years, and who is being
treated at the Henry Phipps Clinic, is improving physically, but
will never fully recover her mental faculties, according to Dr.
Lewis A. Sexton of the hospital.
_D_. The following sentences contain errors due principally to faulty ellipsis. Point out the faults in ellipsis and correct all errors. (Mainly paragraph =156=.)
1. Marvin Cloudt and Ferdinand Willie attended the dance Tuesday
night at Mrs. Jamie Kanak's, and hear they enjoyed it well and
caught themselves nice sweethearts.
2. The Leyland liner Armenian was torpedoed and sunk on June 28
by a German submarine. The vessel was carrying 1,414 mules,
which were consigned for the port of Avonmouth. A large number
of the missing are American citizens.
3. Specimens of all our students are preserved and show
remarkable results in this department of our school work.
4. Please inform your readers there is a reward of $10 for
shooting pelicans, and a fine of $25 for the shooter.
5. All veterans attending on the regular old soldiers' and
settlers' day next Tuesday may secure tickets for themselves,
wives, or widows which will admit them free of charge on
Wednesday.
6. He complained to his physician that he stuffed him so much
with drugs that he was ill a long time after he got well.
7. William Kohasky and Henry Young, two young chaps, were
friends, but last evening after imbibing freely from the cup
that cheers forgot all about their friendliness and started to
fight.
8. The person retaining my dog, a Lewellen setter, is known and
if not let at liberty at once, will be prosecuted.
9. Daughter and granddaughter of soldiers, her father was on
MacMahon's staff, and the image of that tall old man stretched
out before her evoked in her mind another image no less
terrible.
10. If you do use a Blank typewriter you will never be
inconvenienced without one.
11. Frank Becker had a horse break its leg Sunday and had to be
killed.
12. An all university team picked from the best bowlers in
school will be entered in the state tournament this winter for
the first time and will bowl against nearly 300 other teams at 9
o'clock on Jan. 28 on the Colonial alleys.
13. The Woman's Benevolent Society of the Fourth Congregational
Church has been newly decorated, new lights installed, the
matting donated by the Philathea class in place, and all in
readiness for "Go to Church" Sunday.
14. On account of sickness the club meeting will be postponed
from Tuesday until Thursday.
_E._ Reconstruct the following sentences in any way that will make them clear. Point out the errors in the sentences as they now stand. (Mainly paragraphs =157-162=.)
1. A. A. DeLeo, while walking with a young lady the other night,
slipped on the icy pavement and sprained his arm, between
Grobel's corner and the crossing.
2. Some days they only succeeded in gaining a few feet, no
matter how heavy the cannonading.
3. Mr. Scherck explained that sickness in his family has caused
him a great deal of expense in the last year and is sure that he
can meet all his indebtedness, which by the way is not as large
as was reported, by the first of the new year.
4. Miss Louise Hill gave a small luncheon Wednesday, at
Ferndale, where her parents have taken the Frank Bovey house in
honor of Miss Ethel Woolf of Atlanta, Ga., who is her guest.
5. Mr. William Waldorf Astor has reached the fulfilment of the
ambition which brought him from the United States to England
sixteen years ago to become a British subject by his elevation
to-day to the rank of a baron of the United Kingdom.
6. The French are using the grenade as a war weapon with
considerable success in trench fighting, and for guarding the
men who hurl them from poisonous vapors, which are used with
telling effect by the Germans, a special mask is provided.
7. Mr. Moscherosch said this morning that the cap was designed
particularly for chauffeurs and drivers who are obliged to
travel at night and face the blinding light from automobile
lamps, for farmers and factory employees.
8. Van Wie's defense is that he has no recollection of the
marriage on account of an operation performed on his brain.
9. In these elections they are only permitted to vote for an
elector and not for the man running for the office.
10. He finally admitted that not only the testimony was not
true, but that he knew it was false.
11. Lessons which the United States may gain from the European
war comprise the major part of a letter written by Tracey
Richardson of Kansas City, a soldier of fortune, who is now
serving with the Princess Patricia's regiment of Canadians in
Europe, to a Washington friend.
12. Some of the other striking results that have taken place
already since the adoption of this new scheme are: in the first
place, there has been an increase in efficiency. The men do more
work in eight hours than they did before in nine. In the second
place, there is a striking effect in the development of
character.
13. While Harold Green was escorting Miss Violet Wise from the
church social last Saturday night a savage dog attacked them and
bit Mr. Green several times on the public square.
14. One senator expressed the belief that the other outrages
besides the Tampico incident should be considered, such as the
treatment of American citizens in Mexico, and that all the
Mexicans should be included, and not just Huerta.
15. Musical numbers were rendered by Miss Findley on the violin
and Tom Hamilton. The occasion was greatly enjoyed.
16. Quite in keeping with the old-fashioned idea of the wedding
spirit and yet managed with a delicacy and refinement that lent
especial charm to the homely symbols and their significance,
everything was carried out with taste and elegance that could
make it prenuptial in feeling.
17. A burglar, in attempting to enter Wright's store, was shot
at by Winifred Rardin. The man started to run, the bullet
striking him between the fence corner and front gate, inflicting
a superficial wound.
18. The affection has interfered seriously with her singing, her
talent for which has been the subject of high praise and has
brought her to Philadelphia for treatment before.
19. Bacon induced 100 barbers on the West side to advertise
orally to their customers of church organizations between
shaves.
20. When Annie Malone Frazier, colored, was asked which she had
rather have, her husband, Babe Frazier, or $21 which she claimed
he had stolen from her in police matinee Wednesday afternoon,
Annie unhesitatingly chose the $21.
21. Callahan declared he had only bargained for two men each
day.
22. After two weeks fighting they had neither gained the forest
nor even the outer edges of the village.
23. The cause of the fire was said to be the tipping over of a
lamp, which had been left during the night by the family cat.
24. Rev. and Mrs. Pierce have returned from the Green Lake
assembly. The reverend will occupy his pulpit on Sunday morning,
and Monday in company with his wife they will leave to visit
their new-found relatives in Picton, Ontario. On Sunday the
22nd, Mr. Pierce will occupy the Picton pulpit in the morning by
request of the pastor.
25. Both testified that the evil effect is not alone seen in the
motor races.
26. The committee acted last night with the relentless
persistency of a steam roller and crushed out the athletic
activities of two men who were members of the last Olympic team
without compunction.
27. Mrs. Dickenson expects soon to entertain a company of ladies
at luncheon and another dinner party will be given.
28. Mr. Hailey, wife, daughter Miss Ida, and son Will
accompanied by Mrs. Rose Hailey and Master Adran, motored to
Springfield last Saturday and spent the day on business and
visiting relatives, averaging eighteen miles an hour.
29. The young man was taken to Menasha for treatment and his
injury is not expected to prove serious.
30. Wesley Owen got mixed up with his horse Monday and carries a
bad gash in his head where he kicked him, the calk of the shoe
going through his hat and making a hole in the band. He was
being curried when he reared and kicked Wesley. His two outside
fingers on his hand were struck and badly injured. It was lucky
for him he was not more seriously injured. As it was, he was
knocked senseless and had to be helped to the house. Lucky for
him, the horse reared right up and came down on him.
_F._ Rewrite the following sentences in any way that will improve their coherence (mainly paragraphs =163-164=):
1. Some hail fell Sunday evening, but fortunately there was but
little wind, besides the hail was not very solid and not very
large so that the corn and other growing crops suffered but
little, and fortunately there is but very little tobacco growing
in the path of this storm, and which fortunately did not extend
over a very wide territory, possibly not over a mile in width.
2. Things are very quiet to-day. The justice courts are without
criminal matters, and likewise the undertakers report no deaths.
3. Some large steamers operate upon its course, carrying
freight, passengers, and other commodities.
4. Nicholas Jenkins, a retired capitalist, was among the killed.
William Essex, president of the city railway, is still missing,
and several stores were wrecked by the high winds preceding the
rain, but it is thought that the benefits of the heavy rain will
more than offset all losses.
5. Simon Beck sawed wood last Thursday. Charlie Bishop did the
work.
6. With our nose always to the ground for improvements going on
in our part of the city, we are awarded this time with the
beautiful and attractive appearing front of the new moving
picture theater. Namely, a row of incandescent lights hanging in
a straight line above the entrance.
7. In the interests of the picture Mr. Cummings risks life and
limb with careless disregard of his own safety. To be seen on
the Central Plaza Thursday.
8. This is a picturization of the famous novel and play and
appeals to all classes. A gripping story all the way through and
one that will set you thinking.
9. But even if he was possessed of quite remarkable golfing
ability, I do not think there would be much prospect of his
attaining to the consistent brilliancy of Vardon, Braid, and
Taylor, unless he was granted the opportunity of continually
playing with these giants, or men much of their caliber, say
like Duncan and Ray, and nowadays the amateur has but few
opportunities of taking part in games with these celebrities, as
they are so very fully occupied, and in their quest for the
almighty dollar have not the time for the friendly encounter.
10. Prof. C. O. Bishop was Marshall's English teacher and he
failed to pass the rhetoric tests getting only a grade of 60.
11. I believe that the greatest present menace to the American
Indian is whiskey. It does more to destroy his constitution and
invite the ravages of disease than anything else. It does more
to demoralize him as a man and frequently as a woman.
12. The house was beautifully decorated in red and white hearts
extending from the centers of the rooms in each direction, and
in the arch to the dining-room were two large hearts, pierced by
an arrow containing the words "Two hearts that beat as one,"
where after several games were played, Miss Baker was seated and
showered with rice from a funnel, concealed back of the hearts
above, and also showered with more than fifty presents each
containing a verse, which caused much merriment, after which the
guests proceeded to the dining-room, where the color scheme was
also carried out, hearts being extended from a large wedding
bell which hung in the center of the room and the table was
decorated in red and white roses.
13. Appleton people will be interested to read the subjoined
article from the Grand Rapids _Leader_, referring to people
formerly residents of this city, A. C. Bennett and his son,
Arthur, who used to live on Lawrence Street between Oneida and
Morrison streets a generation or more ago, and Rev. H. C. Logan
received his education at Lawrence College.
14. There is a girl, one of the longest drivers I have ever
seen, and I have seen all the best women golfers play, and
though she has a distance of 250 yards or so to her credit, she
is not one of the good drivers, because at the next hole she is
more than likely to send the ball in a semicircle, getting into
some hazard belonging to another hole.
15. In so far as this war is concerned, the capture of the Kiel
canal is almost as important, if not even more so, to England as
it is to France.
16. It is also asserted that, as Germany may ask further
financial assistance from this country before long, which,
naturally, she would be unable to procure in case of a break
with us, and as Great Britain undoubtedly needs such assistance,
and, through American financiers, is even, now procuring it, as
Germany has also done, although in a much more limited way,
hence the race by these powerful belligerents for American
favor.
17. Henry Fleming is being detained at his home this week. A new
stone hitching post has been set in front of the Fleming
residence on East Street.
_G._ The following sentences lack emphasis. Explain why and improve the emphasis in each. (Paragraphs =165-168=.)
1. As we go to press, the news comes to us that Doc Pasley of
southeast of town was instantly killed yesterday afternoon by a
tree falling on him. As we are unable to learn any of the
particulars about it, we are forced to leave it out this week.
2. William Abel, who was convicted last month of the murder of
Thomas Kane, 12 years old, was refused a new trial by Judge
Ormerod, who inflicted the death sentence to be hanged.
3. This is her third visit to Shawano and she spoke of our
beautiful surroundings, especially the large forest trees left
by the early settlers for shade trees and she spoke in praise of
them for their foresight in leaving the large pine trees and
oaks standing.
4. When a team in a tournament contest can trim an opponent 77
to 26, it shows that one team is unusually strong, or that the
other is very, very much inferior.
5. One of E. W. Bishop's fine calves was found violently ill
Monday evening. In its stomach was found a considerable amount
of the poisonous variety of mushrooms, the stomach showing much
information.
6. Eggs of the species, like those of all its immediate
relatives, are laid in water and never in deep water.
7. After the usual eats which received their due share of
attention, numerous toasts were responded to.
8. Billy Sunday and Dr. Francis Clark, the latter the founder of
the Christian Endeavor League, will be unable to attend, both
being ill at the present time.
9. Warren is one of the finest little cities I know of and my
travels take me through the best cities in four states, but
indifference toward the appearance of the city such as is
evidenced by the posting of circus ads over an entire side of a
city building, such as has been done on the building opposite
the city courthouse, I fear would soon cause the traveling
public to change its mind regarding this beautiful little city.
10. Much indignation has been aroused throughout this parish on
account of the fatal stabbing of Joseph Mier, a young man and
the son of a prominent planter, which occurred just before dawn
Sunday morning as a public ball was ending, some miles from this
place.
11. A letter from the James B. Clow and Sons Company, Chicago,
received by the city commission quotes prices on bubbler
fountains such as it is planned to install at the corner of
College Avenue and Oneida Street.
12. Wilbur Grant and Jack Faville left the city this morning to
attend the World's Convention of the Christian Endeavor Society,
which is to be held in Chicago.
13. While driving from Barre Sunday afternoon a tire went down
on the car of Burt Smith causing the machine to slide around a
little but after putting on a new tire he was able to continue
home. The report was started that one wheel was broken but such
developed to be erroneous.
14. Do you know that if you attend the song service and
Christian cantata given Sunday evening by the choir at the First
Methodist Church, you will find a pleasure in spending Sunday
evening in a way that will give satisfaction that comes from the
feeling that you attended an entertainment and have been at
services on the Sabbath day?
15. Louisiana never does things by halves. It was the unanimous
consensus of opinion of all that our chest of silver presented
to Mrs. J. M. Thomson was only surpassed by the Congressional
diamond necklace.
16. She is well educated, and speaks, besides Chinese and
English, the languages of Germany and France.
17. Miss Kathryn Stinson, a lady aviatrix, will fly from Grant
Park to the ball park, and just before the battle starts Manager
Tinker will be presented with a watch and chain.
18. The recent tornado wrought havoc with the Newton church,
tearing off a considerable section of the roof, rafters and all,
and throwing the west end gable down upon the pulpit and nearby
furniture of the interior. The belfry was demolished, and the
bell thrown into the yard. The house is otherwise in a fairly
good condition.
19. A fine and costs of $7.50 was paid in police court yesterday
afternoon for Charles McCormick, who was charged by the police
with creating an improper disturbance at the Sherwood buffet.
20. Others of world-wide repute will appear, and delegates and
noted people from all over the world are arriving and have
already arrived in the city.
21. An article appeared in last week's paper stating a baby boy
was born to Mr. and Mrs. C. M. David, which is incorrect, and
Mrs. David wishes it published that it is not true. It must have
been a joke or mistake.
22. Committees of the passengers in general, and separate
committees of clergymen, students, and newspaper men have been
organized to confer with similar committees in the neutral
nations, when the ship arrives, on the question of peace.
23. The place where the body of Howe was found is the most
convenient location for a body killed elsewhere and removed from
another place to the lonesome spot where it was found.
24. The chimney still stands, although many bricks have been
loosened by the heat, and fallen to the earth below.
25. John Fouts of Olena surprised his friends last Friday
evening by bringing home a new bride. In honor of the occasion
he served an oyster stew to quite a little gathering of friends.
26. He has two of the prettiest homes in our beautiful city for
sale. Home No. 1 is located on Beach Drive on our beautiful
water front, where you can sit on the front porch and watch the
beautiful waves. It has a lot 73 by 150 feet, the bungalow has
eight rooms and is a two-story house, with bath and toilet on
each floor, a beautiful flower garden plan, roses, royal palms,
rubber trees, etc. House No. 2 is located at No. 60 Fifth
Avenue, north, a beautiful location. The house is furnished up
beautifully inside and has a beautiful yard.
27. The bride is a pleasing young woman well known in
Beardstown's social set, and enjoys the acquaintance of everyone
who knows her.
28. She climbed up on the bed and tucked her feet under her, and
the thoughtful forefinger began to slowly trace the pattern on
the bedspread, while Jane Rowland studied her with speculative
spectacles.
29. Passengers are forbidden to stand on the front platform and
will not be allowed to stand on the rear platform.
_H._ The following sentences are unemphatic because of their crude or affected phraseology. Rewrite each so that it shall be good.
1. He leaves nine children, eight of whom are honored and
respected citizens of this state, and the other lives in
Missouri.
2. Pan with his shepherd pipes, Jupiter with his thunderbolts,
Apollo with his harp, and the songstress, Sappho, appeared in
spirit with the Minneapolis Symphony Orchestra, which returned
to Evansville Monday afternoon and night on its annual tour. The
whispering winds of the reed section, the passionate love
pleadings of the cellos, mixed with the blatant fury of the
trumpets, the rumble and thunder of the kettle drums, and
instruments portraying all the varying moods of nature,
presented the whole category of human emotions.
3. She has a wonderful voice, full, round, and velvety, with a
mature richness and at the same time the vibrant joyousness of
youth. While her spring songs bring veritable visions of apple
blossoms and the songs of birds, she can express with equal
perfection the tragedy of grief.
4. Processionals of lovely matrons, trailing draperies of
brilliantly hued velvets, brocades and satins, drifts of
adorable girls, their exquisite slimness enveloped in misty
clouds of tulle or clinging lengths of accordion plaited
taffetas; platoons of the brave and the gallant, the handsome
and the gay of Peoria's golden youth, and substantial business
men, in the correctest of evening garb, lent to the Jefferson
Hotel a stunningly pictorial effect last night when the first
Assembly ball of the season took place at that popular hostelry.
5. Away, away on the pinions of the wind flew the car, the speed
being dexterously regulated according to the grade and curvature
of the road. Many birds, traveling at their best speed, were
easily overtaken and left far in the rear; horse conveyances
going at a gallop appeared to be standing still; farm houses
looked like hen-coops, and Eholt resembled a chicken ranch. For
speed, Mazeppa's ride was far outclassed. It was a memorable
trip to those in the car, but everyone had implicit confidence
in the chauffeur and there were no white feathers visible.
6. His heart is of gold, pure 14-carat gold, all wool and a yard
wide.
7. Throughout the entire visit of the society members the prison
band, stationed in the balcony over the prison entrance,
dispersed sweet music.
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